domingo, 12 de octubre de 2008

Presentation

HI!

My name is Marc Lòpez. I'm 15 years old. I live in Olot. I live with my father, my mother and my brother. My father's name is Joan Francesc, my mother's name is MªCarme and my brother's name is Pol.
I like going out with my friends, riding my motorbike and listening to dance and techno music. I ride my motorbike every day because I go to school by motorbike. I go to the cinema once a month but I meet my friends all Saturdays and Sundays.
I'm friendly and I like meeting new friends. I've got brown hair and brown eyes too.
This is my presentation!
Good bye!!!

1 comentario:

Cristina dijo...

Hello Marc!

You have done an excellent presentation, congratulations! You deserve an A mark.

Here are a few corrections, please correct them in your presentation ok? The corrections are in capital letters. Good job!


HI!

My name is Marc Lòpez. I'm 15 years old. I live in Olot. I live with my father, my mother and my brother. My father's name is Joan Francesc, my mother's name is MªCarme and my brother's name is Pol.
I like going out with my friends, riding my motorbike and listening to dance and techno music. I ride my motorbike every day because I go to school by motorbike. I go to the cinema once a month but I meet my friends all Saturdays and Sundays.
I'm friendly and I like MEETING new friends. I've got brown hair and brown eyes too.
This is my presentation!
Good bye!!!